Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Scene Description - Mariam Y4.


There is a girl stuck on a beach all alone right after sunset.  This girl has brown, chocolate looking hair and a turquoise tail. She was looking for precious jewelry under the sea water, but she got swept up onto the sore like a piece of seaweed. The girl is trapped on the beach with no one to talk to. Suddenly, a strange shadow come straight to the girl.

The girl tries to find a place to hide, she looks behind her and goes onto the flowers while the strange shadow goes straight from where the girl was. The girl was so scared now that she might get caught by the people walking on the beach. What  was the girl going to do?
It was now midnight and the girl still was stuck on the beach. She was crying like a little fish would cry.


A few hours later of crying, the girl noticed that it was nearly sunrise! The girl was still on the beach and crying, so the girl took a deep breath and then the girl saw people that were going to swim their cold, morning swim. Then the girl tried after the person left because they thought they had hyperthermia but luckily they did not have hyperthermia. When the girl tried, she was so proud of herself because she finally did it!

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